Gamers With Jobs T-shirt contest entry

So this is it! First post!
Here’s my submission for a contest issued by Gamers With Jobs, a great community site for videogames. They wanted a proposal for a new T-Shirt design, so I put this together. They’ll publish the results soonish, fingers crossed! Not that I stand to win any money, mind you, but it would be awesome to see my design printed!
Go take a look if you like videogames, it’s a very friendly and mature community, and they have a fantastic weekly podcast. I lurk in their forums under the screen name il dottore.

Please comment! Otherwise I’ll never learn :)